G. Nakasha

Subject: G. Nakasha Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:49 pm

Name: Nakasha Gantaguun

D.O.B.: 6/21/2019 15 years old.

Height: 6'0"

Weight: 135 lbs

Natural hair color: white

Eye color: Red

Mailing Address: 2567 rstreet Ave., Wa, USA, 98001

Telephone Number: 555-888-4665

Social Security No.: 327564869

Family Average Yearly Income: $413,000

Mother's Name: Shiro Gantaguun {Drakoth}

Father's Name: Senji Gantaguun

Brief description of powers: He can manipulate his blood into needle like projectiles and can launch them at high velocity.

Subject: Re: G. Nakasha Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:52 pm

Pending

Please make the appropriate edits before continuing and notify the staff member once it is ready for review.

- while this is a supernatural roleplay, it's for gifteds, not for vampires.
sorry, kiddo. xD

Subject: Re: G. Nakasha Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:41 pm

Pending

Please make the appropriate edits before continuing and notify the staff member once it is ready for review.

- you're still going to have to edit some things. e.g. 'bloodgutch ave', and dracula being his father, or being paid in gold pieces. this creation is going to have to be pretty much remade entirely.
- also, i don't think a "branch of sin" is appropriate for this roleplay. the closest thing i can think of to what you're describing is "blood manipulation", which is a fine power.

you just need to get out of the focus of vampires and more into the focus of gifteds.
go look at the teachers, or other accepted creations for reference if you need too. c:

Subject: Re: G. Nakasha Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:09 pm

Accepted

Congratulations and welcome to Beata.