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| | Subject: Re: Heathershaw, James Ray Tue Feb 24, 2015 8:11 pm | |
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Please make the appropriate edits before continuing and notify the staff member once it is ready for review.
- The power could use some tweaking. If your power is just shapeshifting, I suppose that's fine, but it can't be both shapeshiting and control/seduction/whatever you would call it.
- If you want something that's acceptable and still mostly the same, I would suggest that he can change people's "perception" of his appearance. Like, he isn't actually physically changing into somebody else, but when he uses his power on somebody, they see him differently? If that makes sense? You don't have to use that, I was just brainstorming. xD
- Just tweak the gift a little and I'll happily approve this. Welcome back to the site! | |
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Coal
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| | Subject: Re: Heathershaw, James Ray Wed Feb 25, 2015 7:20 pm | |
| Is that okay? I guess if it isn't, I don't really understand. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Heathershaw, James Ray Wed Feb 25, 2015 7:35 pm | |
| Yes, that's great. Sorry for any inconvenience. Accepted
Congratulations and welcome to Beata. | |
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