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PostSubject: Lovve, Sky M.   Lovve, Sky M. EmptyFri Mar 29, 2013 6:03 am
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Name: Sky Martin Lovve

D.O.B.: M/D/Y - My age is 16.

Height:5'6

Weight:125 Ibs.

Natural hair color:Natural Black *I dyed to a darkish purple*
Eye color: Hazel

Mailing Address: 785 Clouds street. 1234

Telephone Number: 555-679-3456

Social Security No.: 1234567890

Family Average Yearly Income: $87,000

Mother's Name: Chloe H. Lovve

Father's Name: Harry Martin Lovve

Siblings Attending the School:I have none.

Brief Description of Gifts:
Spawning Wings Power


Effect:I am allowed to spawn wings when they are needed and I can fly like my pet.

Pet from home (if applicable) My Mom and Little sister have two brown-ish twin poodles.
(I don't have a pet)



Lovve, Sky M. A_Mini_Poodle


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PostSubject: Re: Lovve, Sky M.   Lovve, Sky M. EmptyFri Mar 29, 2013 8:09 am


Pending

Please make the appropriate edits before continuing.


    - Well, first, please make the eye color and hair color natural. Dyeing and color-contacts are possible, but it is impossible to have naturally blue/purple hair or cyan eyes.
    - Please change the weight to something more natural. The average weight for a woman of 5'6" is 127 lbs, and 60 lbs is dangerously underweight for a sixteen year old.
    - I wouldn't really advise the power, it seems rather Sue-ish to me, but if the other mods are okay with it then it is fine.
    - You can't have a magical creature as a pet; there is no such thing as a "rainbow pet bird." Would you like a parrot, perhaps? They come in several different colors and species and some can even mimic words. . .
    - And unless your parents were hippies, I don't think the name "Sky Heart Lovve" is very ... normal. If anything, please at least change the middle name.

    EDIT:

    - Thank you for fixing those. However, there's one more thing: Does Sky actually own any pet?


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PostSubject: Re: Lovve, Sky M.   Lovve, Sky M. EmptySat Mar 30, 2013 11:50 am

Accepted


Congratulations and welcome to Beata.



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