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Jay
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| | Subject: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:08 pm | |
| SUMMARY
(VERSION 0.01, CLOSED ALPHA)
It is a normal day in Beata. The sun is high, and it is obvious that spring is coming to the school. Finally too, for winter has been a frozen mess. Two peculiar individuals show up to school one day, walking across the campus as they seem to be trying to get somewhere. They are a boy and girl of student age, and would fit in well with those around them if they weren't in a different uniform. Upon this uniform, engraved in a hardened thread material, is an emblem. The emblem says "Sofía Akadimía" in golden letters, and depicts a man surrounded by birds, carrying a torch. This man is the old Greek philosopher, Plato.
Oh, you didn't think Beata was the only school of your kind, did you? Sofía Akadimía is a secret school hidden within the Mount Pentelicus ranges outside of Athens, and acts as the European equivalent to Beata. Tucked away where the forest meets the mountain's higher points, the school is rumored to have been the second academy created by Plato himself. Whether this is a myth or not is up for you to decide, but Plato is celebrated as the school's guide in wisdom, knowledge, and power. As Beata Academy does, Sofía Akadimía trains students in their supernatural abilities and allows them to control these powers for the safety of others.
Why are these students here in America, however? It is learned that they intend to seek the Headmaster's help. There is a mysterious evil stirring trouble in the Athens area, and it is feared that it is looking for the school itself. Sofía Akadimía asks for the students of Beata Academy for help with this evil, for it could very well destroy the ancient school and reveal it to the world!
But is this evil only in Greece...?
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Oven
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:10 pm | |
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Jay
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:11 pm | |
| Ebs and I were discussing this last night, so the possibility is a heavy one.
What a fatty. | |
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Oven
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:15 pm | |
|  ^The plot | |
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Falcon
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:34 pm | |
| I would join this. Sounds bangin'. | |
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Jay
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 5:42 pm | |
| VERSION 0.02, CLOSED ALPHA- Minor bug fixes.
- Changed girl and guy messengers to girl and girl. Thank the shitty yaoi artists that make up 90 percent of anime drawers who sketch guys.
- Added the concept of there being a bunch of Beata schools, these being throughout the world.
- Added the concept of Sofia being the oldest and original Beata school.
- Removed Herobrine.
WHAT'S TO COME- A definite villain with a definite backstory and motive. Villain likely to be a group.
- Actual characters as the messengers.
- Sofia uniform, idk idc.
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Echo
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 6:40 pm | |
| Actual characters as messengers? Ooh. This seems like a nice idea~ | |
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Jay
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 6:59 pm | |
| I didn't mean actual Beata characters, by the way. I meant they won't be faceless. They're going to have names and appearances and personalities. | |
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Lilac
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:37 pm | |
| I think all around this is an AMAZING, well thought out idea. I love the concept of this, but I am confused about one thing. If their are multiple Beata's around the world, then why would characters from around the world attend this Beata as opposed to a closer one, not that far away from home?
Is it a concept of who recruits the student first or...?
I love this and I would LOVE to be a part of this! | |
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Jay
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:39 pm | |
| Yeah, I mentioned this problem on Skype. We deduced that Quinnie went to Beata because America is more Irish-friendly.
You can just think up a reason to yourself. Multiple Beatas make sense if the goal is to find these people and control their power. | |
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Sleepy
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:49 pm | |
| Language might be a reason. If they're from the British Isles, it would make sense that they'd go to an English speaking school.
As for the blind anorexic French girl we have, I can't really think up a reason. French is widely spoken across Europe and she knows no English. | |
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Kitty
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Tue Mar 11, 2014 11:46 am | |
| Lol, I love this plot idea.
Also, yes. I don't have a reason either, but Sibyla had to be made. | |
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Oven
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Tue Mar 11, 2014 5:35 pm | |
| Technically she didn't. You weren't being forced to make her.
Also, who would play them? | |
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Jay
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| | Subject: Re: Jay's Sitewide Plot Idea - Summary and Planning Topic Thu Mar 13, 2014 4:14 pm | |
| The messengers? Sleepy and I will. Slepadoodle volunteered. | |
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Sleepy
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