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Aessa
Posts : 167 Beata Bucks : 11856 Join date : 2014-02-15
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 4:44 pm | |
| Aessa couldn't help but giggle. "She called you awesome and confessed that her heart belonged to your's completely," Aessa said with total honesty, though she left out the part where Seri confessed to her. It just didn't seem like the right time to say it Viola now, or ever really. Maybe, she could just never mention it. Suddenly, Seri tore off running past her, her tears splattering Aessa's shirt. "Seri! Where are you going?!" she asked frantically, turning around to Viola again, "Viola, we have to go after her!" | |
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MagicConch
Posts : 83 Beata Bucks : 11850 Join date : 2014-02-16 Location : Your local grocery store
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:06 pm | |
| "Yeah, let's go." She said. Viola started to run after Seri, She didn't understand why she ran away though. She said that? If she can say it so many times, why can't I say it once? Maybe she's better off without me. Viola had treated Seri differently since their second encounter. She was starting to think that she couldn't become anything more than Seri's friend. | |
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annakia sunakia
Posts : 94 Beata Bucks : 11880 Join date : 2014-02-16
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:11 pm | |
| a baregade of aniamels balck them | |
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Aessa
Posts : 167 Beata Bucks : 11856 Join date : 2014-02-15
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:18 pm | |
| Aessa scrowled. "Are you for reals?" she muttered, throwing her hands up in exasperation, "I don't want to hurt them." That was true: she had grown a liking for the rainbowgators, funny looking or not. She would feel horrible if she had to kill only one of them. Besides, her power was completely useless when the situation was battle-related. The only idea she had in mind was flying over them but even that, she sucked at. "I can turn into a fairy and fly over," she said to Viola, looking for her reaction carefully, "But then I don't know what would happen to you." | |
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annakia sunakia
Posts : 94 Beata Bucks : 11880 Join date : 2014-02-16
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:21 pm | |
| seri walks up to viola and plants a huge kiss on her lips you don't have to say it when i know it i told you before i love you to | |
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MagicConch
Posts : 83 Beata Bucks : 11850 Join date : 2014-02-16 Location : Your local grocery store
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:13 pm | |
| Viola took a couple big steps back. She didn't like all the random things Seri was doing. Why did she do it? She blocked them out just to walk over and kiss her. Viola was confused at why she was getting to be so weird. | |
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annakia sunakia
Posts : 94 Beata Bucks : 11880 Join date : 2014-02-16
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:15 pm | |
| sorry about the randomness. but i want to just be alone with you for ounce. | |
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Aessa
Posts : 167 Beata Bucks : 11856 Join date : 2014-02-15
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:19 pm | |
| Aessa frowned. First Seri was running and then she was turning back? This was all very confusing. So of course, when Seri kissed Viola, she was feeling a mix of relief and confusion. Relief because Seri was okay but confusion because of her sudden return. But nevertheless, she was happy for them....though Viola seemed less than pleased. | |
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annakia sunakia
Posts : 94 Beata Bucks : 11880 Join date : 2014-02-16
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:30 pm | |
| i'm sorry i kissed you viola-chon | |
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MagicConch
Posts : 83 Beata Bucks : 11850 Join date : 2014-02-16 Location : Your local grocery store
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 6:56 pm | |
| "It's fine Seri, just don't do it again." she said in an annoyed tone. She was in love with Seri, but at the same time she was mad at her. Every time they met, something weird happened. She hoped that these side effects didn't last much longer. | |
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Aessa
Posts : 167 Beata Bucks : 11856 Join date : 2014-02-15
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 7:03 pm | |
| Aessa didn't know what to say. Obviously Viola was mad but Seri was clearly oblivious to it. There was nothing to do but to lighten the mood. "Just don't release the animals next time Seri," she said nervously, "We were worried about you." | |
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annakia sunakia
Posts : 94 Beata Bucks : 11880 Join date : 2014-02-16
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 7:16 pm | |
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Shadow Moderator
Posts : 1240 Beata Bucks : 12286 Join date : 2013-03-14
| Subject: Re: Flowers are nice, right? (CLOSED) Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:21 pm | |
| OOC: okay... I don't mean to interrupt, but Anna, please... please try to add a little more to your posts. Having an entire post just saying "are you mad at me" doesn't really help the other people who are role playing with you. It doesn't give them much to work with. As Lilac has told you before: try to add some things about how your character is feeling, or what they are specifically doing at that moment. Heck, even describing what the character is wearing or how they are standing gives the other person a lot to work with. It expresses emotions a lot better than one liners blatantly pointing out how the character feels. For example, if Viola were to post again and the entire post consists of "Yeah," That wouldn't really help you out to post. You know what I mean? For example, there's Viola's post: - Viola wrote:
- "It's fine Seri, just don't do it again." she said in an annoyed tone. She was in love with Seri, but at the same time she was mad at her. Every time they met, something weird happened. She hoped that these side effects didn't last much longer.
Not only does the the character say that she is fine with what is going on, Viola goes on to explained specifically how the character really feels and how she said what she said. The character wouldn't just flat out say "It's fine, but I'm mad at you, don't do it again" since that would be a little rude. She implies that the character is mad to make things a little more interesting. So like, in this case, you could say that Seri could hear the annoyance in Viola's voice and then ask if she was mad at Seri while Seri tried to calm herself down from crying or something of the sort. Does this make sense?? | |
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